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Drabble: Perfect Little Moments
Hubie
shining_moment
Title: Perfect Little Moments
Author:
shining_moment
Characters/Pairing:
Ten/Donna, Jack
Rating:
G
Word Count:
100
Summary:
Post-JE, not happy, no fluff in sight. Written for the Weekly Drabble Prompt #20 ('perfect') at doctor_donna
Disclaimer:
The BBC definitely owns the Doctor and Donna in this story. I will lay claim to the happy ever after kind :)


“She used to do this thing when we were holding hands where she’d reach over with her free hand and run her fingers up and down my arm, so softly I’m not sure she even realised she was doing it,“ he smiles sadly, taking another gulp from the glass, looking at Jack who nods at him to continue, “That‘s what I miss most, those little things, those perfect little moments…”

He stops, slipping into a melancholy silence.

“You loved her,” Jack states, simply.

“ I still do,” he swallows hard and looks away, “I don’t know how I’ll ever stop.”



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*SOB*

I loved that, can see the scene play out in my head. But oh so very sad. :(

Oh, poor Doctor. :( such a lovely memory for him - I can see why he would remember that. And I love that Jack realized what he meant. Gorgeous, as always!

Oh yeah, Jack knew. I don't the Doctor did a good job of hiding it.

DDDDDD:

And I thought that prompt word would inspire happy fics...but I don't mind because this is perfect and I'm a sucker for fics when he confesses to Jack/Martha/anyone or when someone makes him see that.

I have a possible happy one in the works but this one wouldn't go away...thanks :)

Of course he does! Poor, poor Doctor.

Aww :'( How very heartbreaking. But beautiful.

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Poor Doctor :( Thanks so much!

*wibble*

Not gonna cry. Not gonna cry. Not gonna cry. I'm gonna cry.

D;

Is pretty tho.

Awww, the wibbles....thanks though :)

*cries*

Poor Doctor...

*cries a bit more*

*heart splinters into a gazillion bits* Aww, poor, poor Ten :-(

I love this.

I know, poor Ten :(

Thanks :)

*sniff!* Sad; nice, but sad.

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.
But wonderful.
Poor Doctor. *pets him*

Aww, I know, poor Doctor :(

Thank you :)

re: Drabble: Perfect Little Moments

So very sad. I can just see and hear this.

Oh this is beautiful, I can so see her subconsciously touching him like this.

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D:<
But I'm glad that Jack was there for him...

I'm starting to work my way back through you're stuff!

Poor Doctor, that was so sad.

Aww, bless you for wading through what you've missed.

Thanks *hugs*

first i half hate you for this fic, but it's overcome by love! God, Donna, i'm gonna miss her for soo long!

Glad it's only half hate and that it was overcome ;)

Me too, I think I'll always miss her.

she sticks to your gut, in all the best ways. :-/
i've been looking and asking around, but so far nothing, do you know of any fics where Donna remains as a Time Lady?

I am terrible at keeping track of the billions of fic I've memoried...ask over at doctor_donna, I'm sure someone more organised than me will be able to help :)

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